Here is the link on youtube if that doesn't work: http://youtu.be/rZsg2_wxCBo
Oh and ignore the fact that its on Sarah's account- I forgot to log her out!
Grade:
Knowledge and understanding of the extract: 5
I think I showed a little understanding of the extract by explaining where in the novel it is. I knew the scene and what the purpose of it was, as well as what happens later in the novel. However, I think I could have discussed the context more and specified how the examples applied to the text as a whole. I also think I could have talked about major themes in the novel and connected this passage to these.
Appreciation of the writer's choices: 6
I pull many examples from the text and talk about how they impact the text, but I do not talk about the overall effect enough. I think I focused too much on the individual examples and what they mean and I didn't talk about the reason Shakespeare made these choices. I also think I repeat a lot and my thoughts don't make much sense sometimes. I never concluded anything either.
Organization and presentation: 3
I tried to organize this presentation and I think that I succeeded in the basic outline. However, I brought up tone and irony and never went into depth about these. I think I need to organize a lot more when I actually do this, because I got lost a lot and I ramble about random stuff too much.
Language: 2
I don't even know what I am trying to say sometimes. I think I use appropriate language sometimes but most of the time it was nervous rambling and I should probably fix that.
Please ignore the part I talk about restless ecstasy! I realized as I was saying it that it made no sense...
Oh and sorry for the awkward pauses!
I think this might be too blurry to read and it is a total mess but here is my article!
